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Whilst the author thinks that deforestation has enough advantages to outweigh its negative impact, the lecturer opposes the author’s claims. In the lecturer's opinion, these reasons do not hold water.

cover - пакрыць, outweigh - пераважыць
прапаную the negative impact of it → its negative impact. так часцей кажуць, Ngram
his - whose? the author's or the lecturer's?

First, the author claims that deforestation gave people a higher number of opportunities in farming. Furthermore, it is stated in the article that it is also beneficial for the local economy. Additionally, he maintains the idea that a greater quantity of eating products can be made.

таксама не памылка, а толькі ідэя замяніць паўторныя more (more opportunities, Furthermore, more eating products) на сінонімы

In contrast, the lecturer argues that the author does not pay attention to the long-term issues that deforestation can cause.

which азначае, што далей пойдзе проста дадатковая інфа, а that - важная, ключавая. перад which коска, а перад that - не

Second, the author mentions that deforestation can also increase the amount of space for housing.

However, the lecturer shows the insufficiency of this argument by mentioning that this can only cause short-term income. He supports his claim, saying that there is a more efficient solution – farming without using soil.

calls this argument - заве гэты аргумент
can only cause гучыць больш стандартна, чым can cause only (Ngram)
saying і by ужо былі, так што заменім)
"solution" (as a synonym for "the answer to a problem") is countable

What is more, he remarks that deforestation is damaging for animals and plants. According to the lecturer, such a procedure exemplifies his statement, given the fact that 82 percent of oxygen is produced by forests.

furthermore разам пішацца і ўжо было ў тэксце, лепш сінонім)
вялікі сказ разаб'ём на два
given the fact that - устойлівае

Finally, the author asserts that the forestry industry is a crucial part of the economy in lots of states, where deforestation is a great source of money for the population. Unlike the author, the lecturer holds that low-income people hardly ever have access to this money and that it is mostly beneficial for businessmen.

a crucial part for the states - ключавая частка для штатаў
As opposed to неяк сюды не пасуе, мне здаецца 🧐 as opposed to - хутчэй..., чым.... (I notice the government also talk about job seekers these days as opposed to people who are unemployed), замест чагосьці (The box is made of plastic, as opposed to wood.)
access у гэтым значэнні без артыкля часцей (гл. B1)

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